An experimental poem by Michael Dickel on Anti-Narrative—
Prologue to Dick Moby experimental Melville Orphan another found only children missing her after search retracing her in that, Rachel cruising—devious. Last up, me— picked and, nearer, near drew sail, a day, a second, on the. Beaks sheathed with sailed hawks— sea savage the mouths—padlocked with, as if by, glided sharks un-harming. Main, like dirge, and soft floated I on, night and day whole—one almost, coffin that up buoyed for. Side my by floated, and over fell, sea from lengthwise shot buoy, life-coffin, the force great with rising, buoyancy great its owing. And, spring, cunning of reason liberated, now, burst upward bubble black, the centre vital that gaining, until revolve did I, Ixion, another like, circle wheeling slowly, that of axis, the bubble black like-button towards contracting ever and, then, round and round. Pool creamy subsided had it, reached I when, vortex closing toward, drawn slowly, but (only) then was I me, reached ship sunk of suction spent— half the when, of sight full in and, scene ensuing of margin on floating, so. Astern dropped was boat rocky from out tossed were men three the day last the on when, who, same; the post, vacant the assumed bowman that when, bowman Ahab’s place the take ordained Fates whom I was he, disappearance. Parsee the after that chanced, so it. Wreck survive did one because forth stepped one—any does— here then, why? Done drama. Job: “Thee tell to alone escaped am only I and…” [Note: This is part 1 of an experimental writing of Moby Dick backwards, beginning with the Epilogue as Prologue. The text has been modified and rearranged from a reversal of Melville’s writing.] Published by anti-narrative (as of 26 June 2019, site is gone) https://antinarrative.wordpress.com/
Categories: Poetry
Here’s a form I haven’t seen before…I enjoyed that. I might like to try it sometime
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It actually came up in a humorous conversation—but it sort of makes Dada-esque sense.
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It has a certain je ne sais quoi
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