An experimental poem by Michael Dickel on Anti-Narrative—
Prologue to Dick Moby
experimental Melville
Orphan another found
only children missing her
after search retracing her
in that, Rachel
cruising—devious. Last up, me—
picked and, nearer, near drew sail,
a day, a second, on the.
Beaks sheathed with sailed hawks—
sea savage the mouths—padlocked
with, as if by, glided sharks un-harming.
Main, like dirge, and soft floated I on,
night and day whole—one almost, coffin
that up buoyed for.
Side my by floated, and over fell,
sea from lengthwise shot buoy,
life-coffin, the force great with rising,
buoyancy great its owing.
And, spring, cunning
of reason liberated, now,
burst upward bubble black,
the centre vital that gaining, until
revolve did I, Ixion,
another like, circle wheeling
slowly, that of axis, the bubble
black like-button towards contracting
ever and, then, round and round.
Pool creamy subsided had it,
reached I when, vortex closing
toward, drawn slowly, but
(only) then was I me, reached
ship sunk of suction spent—
half the when, of sight full in
and, scene ensuing of margin
on floating, so. Astern dropped
was boat rocky from out tossed
were men three the day last
the on when, who, same;
the post, vacant the assumed
bowman that when, bowman
Ahab’s place the take ordained
Fates whom I was he, disappearance.
Parsee the after that chanced, so it.
Wreck survive did one because
forth stepped one—any does—
here then, why? Done drama.
Job: “Thee tell to alone escaped am only I and…”
[Note: This is part 1 of an experimental writing of Moby Dick backwards, beginning with the Epilogue as Prologue. The text has been modified and rearranged from a reversal of Melville’s writing.]
Published by anti-narrative (as of 26 June 2019, site is gone)
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Categories: Poetry




Here’s a form I haven’t seen before…I enjoyed that. I might like to try it sometime
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It actually came up in a humorous conversation—but it sort of makes Dada-esque sense.
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It has a certain je ne sais quoi
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